VN - Ren'Py - Android LIFE [v0.4.2 EA] [MateDolce]

Definitely the most promising game that I have played so far.
There is a good strong content (femdom) and I personally LOVE it. I would have pushed even more the boundaries.
It is not an ignorant all-sex game, you need to read the story and understand.
The overall quality of the game is very good, especially the art.

I loved this adult novel. Story is rare, but for people whos like rape and femdom, its perfect. The arts is amazing, I was shocked when I saw all of them naked, really nice work. Sometimes the dialogues are well made, sometimes boring, I think later It will be better. For me it was annoying I had to click after the first sentence for got the second sentence.

Thats all, Im gonna waiting for the next update, hope you will involve more femdom, more rape, maybe some futas in the game. If not, Its fine. Just stay on this road and your game will be really popular!
Well done!

this is one sick and twisted fucking story
who made this?
why is Rea, Rea
is my boy doomed to this fate forever, he deserves better
he had a dog who appreciated him and a lady who... who... could have fallen in love with him DAMMIT!

Great idea.
The story is really interesting. I often just skip text to get juicy scenes, but this one got me. I've read everything. The scenes and animations are hot too. The only downside it that it's very short. 4 scenes with MC and 1 without so far. But I see that the development has begun recently, so it's fine. Waiting for new chapter.

It takes around 10 minutes to get to the first choice and only in this horrid game.
During those first 10 minutes there are:
No h scenes (none in the entire game)
Drawn-out useless exposition
Writing one step removed from cringe

But you wanna the the REAL KICKER;

That one choice is the only choice in the game and it approximately 30 seconds before the game ends.

The one choice doesn't matter before the outcome is the same where, in the only scene in the game, you get your only non h scene.

That's right, you waste upwards of 10 minutes of your life for daft writing, even more daft character, and i'm have the be the most daft out of all of this for taking the time to see how much time this game wastes.

TLDR:
A lot of room for improvement